2011년 1월 25일 화요일

changed speech

Hello! My name is 최준영 from class 23. Today, during this speech contest, I will talk about one main topic, about cigarettes. Many might think that I am going to talk about how smoking is bad. Well, actually, I don't disagree with the idea of smoking. Truly in my own opinion, I think smoking is not that bad. Of course, I won't smoke when I grow up. However, some people enjoys cigarettes, and some, also can do a much better job than the one they normally do after having a smoke. A good example is my friend's father. Anyway, as to emphasize, I'm not saying that smoking is bad. The thing I want to talk about is the problem with cigarette butts which are on fire and how they are dangerous. Some might think like this. It's just a little end of a cigar, what can that little thing do? From now, I will tell you some of the scariest things that 'little thing' can do.
There are two examples which will help me to support my claim. First one is for people, mainly, and another is for animals in the wild or pets. Let's start with our first one, about humans. This was at a time when I went to an amusement park. I was playing with my friends because it was one of their birthdays. We rode on the roller coasters, Gyro drop and other rides. And by the time we were ready to go home, we were exhausted! Maybe that was the first time that we all felt like we wanted to study. At last, we could hear a magnificent scream and cry. I couldn't distinguish what is what because it was an extremely high tone. However, the source of the screams and cries were different. One was coming from a baby inside its baby carriage, and the other one was coming from his mother. Although the origins of the screams were different, the reason was exactly the same. The baby carriage was burning with the baby still inside!!! Everyone who was there was terrified and moved quickly to put out the fire. Luckily the fire was put out with haste. One interesting scene was when a man sprayed the fire extinguisher on baby's face. It might have been helpful for fire fighting, but eventually, it made the baby cry much louder. Do you know why this had happened?? It is because a little cigarette butt which was thrown by a man. That little thing could have taken a human life!!!!
Another incident concerns animals, especially if they are stupid. I have raised two dogs. However, here, the main thing I'm going to talk about is the first dog, which is a Siberian husky that is huge. Because it is a sled dog, it is very strong. Because it is very strong, I am not able to control it if it gets crazy in front of me. One day, I did a little experiment. I got on a skateboard, and made it pull it while I was in. It went fast enough. It was actually faster than being pulled by my friends. Anyway, even though if a dog is strong, it is still okay if it is quiet and obeys its owner. However, this is not the case with my dog. Mine is probably the stupidest dog I've ever met in my 12 year life!!! It barks at anybody, it always tries to run away and it eats anything and even though he is ten years old, he still goes to the washroom in the house. It’s frustrating! Anyhow, here is the story. It was not that long ago. It was just three months ago from now. I was bringing him for a walk to the park and of course I was on my skateboard. And there, I met my friend. I took my one leg down form skateboard and started to talk with my friend. I ordered him to sit. Surprisingly he listened and actually sat. However, a moment later, I could feel the neck rope was pulling out at an extremely rapid speed. My dog had spotted a cigarette butt. If there was only that and no fire, it might have been okay. Unluckily, it had spotted one which was still on fire. And can you guess what happened next? You got it! Correct. It started to put that in his mouth and chew. And it drove him crazy. Jumping up and down, running everywhere, and lastly, went into the water fountain in the park. When I went home, my parents were very angry at me for not taking good care of my own dog. Believe it or not, these two examples are absolutely true.
Lastly, this is some information from the internet. A little naver knowledge for you. According to an internet site article called Cigarette accidents, only 5% of accidents are caused by cigarette butts. However, all of them were big things such as burning babies or crazy dogs.
In conclusion, these stories are just two examples of mine and one some internet information about statistics. Let's not throw our cigarette butts everywhere. If there is one adult beside you doing that, stop him before something big thing happens.
Thank you for listening to my speech.

2011년 1월 23일 일요일

2nd person narrative

You wake up and turns on the computer. There is a new starcraft and Sudden Attack series in my hard disk. There is some time to go to school. And you kept playing..... playing.... playing...... And at last, you sees the message - you had passed three hours logged in sir. Take a rest please.And then, you sees a clock. Oh My God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's already 2'O clock  P.M!!!!!!!  you are doomed. And you decides to pretend sick and keep playing. When your mom comes home, you will not be able to see the sunlight again.

1st person narrative

I'm going to revenge to my school homeroom teacher, who did very bad thing to me.
My plan is to hack her naver account and blow up everything, from our scores to school's secret documents. Because she is the head of the teachers, she has almost every important and secert documents. And when I blow them up, She will not be seen in our school anymore. First, I should know her ID and password. I know how to do it. When I know her personal number, it could be the easiest thing in the world. Luckily, I memorized it already. From her ID card, I took a picture of  the number of her card. If  I want, I can do or see everything which is secret and important to our class and to our school. But, those things are too weak. I can erase everything. When I press shift +delete, the documents that are erased can't be back again. I will start that when I go back to school after vacation. If teacher hits me one more time, I will kill her account and every secret documents.

out my window - highrise

I'm going to write about life of sylva, who is visual artist and living in high building
First, I will talk about her life.
She had twins.
They became the huge turning point to her life.
Because she is an visual artist, she was used to traveling and going anywhere.
However now, because the twins were borned, she can't to such things
In her apartment or town, at first, the town was gray.
I could see through the pictures where she made into slide show.
The buildings were actually gray.
Because of the gray buildings, the sky looked like gray too.
It was definitely not a good looking.
However, it started to develop.
From 1989, there was a revolution on buildings.
So, as I could see in one picture of building, which is after revolution, it was colorful and sky, was also changed into marine blue.
Now, I will compare this with my own town, called Daegu in Korea.
I think Daegu is developed city. I'm satisfied with it, al least Daegu is not a small town.
However, its was not occured in one second.
The time went by, and it started to develop slowly.
Because Daegu was surrounded by mountains, it was difficult to develop it.
Trucks cannot go inside, there was no worth to develop it.
Howevr, from then, Daegu started to develop itself. The korean government's order of develop the whole city in  Korea.
I think the relationship between sylva and our city is quite deep.
As the revolution period goes by, her town and my town started to develop slowly, and the gray time passed and it became the good places to live in.

2011년 1월 19일 수요일

Wacky web tale

I fell asleep yesterday listening to an old album that my mom had. I really enjoyed it, though I had a weird dream. It was kind of like one of the old songs.
I've been workin' in house,
All the beautiful day.
I've been workin' in house,
Just to pass the time away.
Don't you hear the whistle thrilling?
Rise up so early in the morn.
Don't you hear Obama shouting
Johnny, play your horn? ”
Johnny, won't you play,
Johnny, won't you play,
Johnny, won't you play your horn?
Johnny, won't you play,
Johnny, won't you play,
Johnny, won't you play your horn?
Someone's in the sector 7 with Johnny.
Someone's in the sector 7, I know.
Someone's in the sector 7 with Johnny
Strumming on the old gunshot.
It was the weirdest dream I've had in a long time!

2011년 1월 18일 화요일

viral videos - major


Because i like baseball, I'm enjoing this video

My speech

Hello! My name is 최준영 from class 23. Today, in this speaking contest, I will talk about one main topic, about cigarettes. Many might think I am talking smoking is bad. Well, actually, I don't disagree from an idea of smoking. Truly in my own opinion, I think smoking is not that bad. Of course, I won't smoke when I grow up. However, some enjoys cigarettes, and some, also can do much better job when they do them after smoking. A good example is my friend's father. Anyway, as to emphasize, I'm never saying that smoking is bad. The thing I want to tell is, the cigarette butts of snipes, which are on fire, are bad. Some might think like this. ' It's just a little end of cigar, what that little thing can do'. From now, I will tell you a scariest thing that 'little thing' can make.
There are two examples which will help me to support my claim. First one is for people, mainly, and another is for animals in the wild or pets. Let's start with our first one, about humans. This was the time when I went to the amusement park. I was playing with my friends because it was one of their birthday. We took roller coasters, zirodrop(name of a machine), and many other things. And the time we would go home, we were exhausted. Maybe that was a frist time for us to feel that we wanted to study. At last, we could hear a magnificent scream and cry. I couldn't distinguish what is what because it was a extremely high tone. However, the source of them were different. One was from baby inside its baby carriage, and another was from his mother. Although the origin of the screams were different, the reason was exactly the same. The baby carriage was burning with the baby still inside!!! Everyone who was there were terrified and moved busily to turn off the fire. Luckily fire was gone after a moment. One interesting scene was, the men pouring a fire extinguisher on baby's face. It might been helpful for fire fighting, but eventually, it made baby cry much more louder. Do you know why this had happened?? It is because a little cigarette butt which is thrown by a men. That little thing can had killed one human life!!!!
Another is, for animals, especially if they are stupid. I raised two dogs once. However, here,

Ode

Dear GTA3
you are thrilling,
your actions are great,
your sounds make my heart beat fast
your graphic is the best
I want to have you
I want to play you
I want to crash you
I want to shoot you
Just wait.....I will do everything to you

2011년 1월 13일 목요일

Rhythem Star

Rhythem Star
fast, fun
shoothing, running, speeding
Stuents, friends, families
winning, earning, losing
getting medals!!!

Ice skating

Ice Skating
fast speed, thrilling feel
speeding, running, sliding
Coaches, students, athletes, competitors.
winning, losing, laughing, crying.
Winning the Championship!!

2011년 1월 11일 화요일



< after watching " spring, summer, fall, winter, spring "


     Movie  spring, summer, fall, winter, spring is a movie which one young monk's master saw him tortchering animals, fish, frog, snake, and did same thingto him., which was tieing a rock to his body to teach him a lesson. There can be many people that disagree with master's teaching method. At the first scene, I thought like that also. I thought he was too cruel to the boy. However, now, I think it is reasonable punishment for the action that boy did. I think its the most effective and a thing that leaves a strong meaning to someone who did sojmething wrong. So, I agree with his strange teaching sklls to make him know his faults well. And this one thing following is my own experience which is very similar - almost the same punishment I got to the teacher, for similar reason.
     This was a thing which happened in my own school. When I was 3rd grade, there was a game called attack the ants. Do you know how to play this game?? It is same as the name. Just attacking ants, stepping on them. As usual, I was attacking the ants at break time with my friends. It was fun as usual. Everything were same exept one big thing which was different happened. One friend of mine got cauget by teacher. It might be okay if it was our homeroom teacher. However, unluckily, it was the scariest teacher in our school -  our math teacher. He caught only one boy, not me. Don't think I'm lucky yet. My story is not finished yet. That jerk called everyone who played together with him to teacher. Of course, I was in that group also. The punishment was, we being the ants and him acting almost the same we did to ants. We lied in front of the class. And later, he started to step on our back. It was very painful. Luckily, we didn't died like those poor ants. Now, he is not in our school. He got cauget by headmaster of our school. But after that lesson which was very cruel to me,  we could not step on ants again.
     In conclusion, like this, I think even though the way punishing is cruel, I think it is good to have the method which is cruel, but effective, like the thing that master done to his pupil.

after watching "spring, summer, fall, winter, spring"

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2011년 1월 7일 금요일

Writing class in KMLA - writing chain:It was a dark stormy night by class23

Introduction
 I think it was a pretty good story. The start was a dark stormy night, so I was trying to make it as a scary horror story, but actually it became better than I thought. But the last part and the name of people, because it was little complicated, it was not my type. So, I changed those into more simple names and relationships.
Essay
It was a dark stormy night. A men was looking out of his window. He was human hunter, whose name was Jigsaw. He spotted one man. His eyes started to glow in the dark. That poor man didn't know he was not going to see the sunlight again after this night. His job was professor and as usual, he was walking slowly to his house to see his cute son and his beautiful wife. He also was a professor who taught Jigsaw in the college. The professor's name was Mr. Harry. He almost always punished Jigsaw and he is the one who made Jigsaw unable to see his family again. Suddenly, Jigsaw jumped out of the window. He didn't get hurt because he is trained as a killer at army. Behind him. Jigsaw thought for a while.
'Hmm... is it right for me to kill my past professor?? But he killed my parents. It is right for me to kill him for the revenge. That's right. I will KIL:L HIM!!!!'
After few seconds. Mr. Harry was bleeding under Jigsaw's foot, who was smiling, dead. The police came but it was too late. There was no Jigsaw but his note, wrote
' I'm human hunter Jigsaw. From now, I will kill everyone who has done something to me and my family. You should beware of  me. I will give 1 day. You better leave this country. ' From that day, on the news, always there was Jigsaw's face and notes which was different everyday, and person who was dead. This was a life he dreamed everyday. He kept running away, enjoying the thrill of murder. From the day when police found first note of  Jigsaw, exactly one year past. Jigsaw knew that there will be lots of polices there. And he was right. But, he went there anyways. He needed a swat tank for his another mission. He got a person tracking him, and he was now right behind him, whose name was lemon. Lemon shouted " there is Jigsaw!! Kill him before he kills anyone!!!" Using that time, Polices in the swat tank came out. Jigsaw climbed in there and started the engine. Inside, there were many weapons. He took bombs and landmines and threw them towards other tanks and cars following him. Luckily, he could destroy all of them. One strange thing about Jigsaw was that he didn't made his teams. Other famous killers such as Harang, who was Jigsaw's father, made so many teams in the world, and as I told, MR. Harry knew that and tell that to police and made him to get death penalty. 30 years past after that. Jigsaw was now too old. There was one person left who killed all the families even cousins of Jigsaw, president of america. Old swat tank was in his garage with new weapons never used. we started the engine and went to white house, where president was living. Guards thought strange about why old swat tank will come here. Jigsaw ignored them and killed all, and stole the monster truck they had. He crashed in the glass door. There was U.S president right infront of him. Jigsaw fired every weapons he got. Eventually, none of them could get to the president, but to his body guards. He took bombs out and hugged president. More guards came but it was too late. Bomb was fired and they both died.                                                                           - The End -
I think the first one was little complicated story, so I changed into more simple, short and impacting story I liked the story afterall

2011년 1월 6일 목요일

few days in KMLA

In KMLA I'm learning many kinds of English. The most part that I like is writing and history. Debate, well, I like that but teacher is little boring. He is very good teacher but his voice is little boring. He speaks so slowly. Here food is very good. However, I like my mother's better still. I sometimes learn math. So far, I like life here. Tomorrow, I will go skiing. I can't ski. I hope is fun.