2011년 1월 18일 화요일

My speech

Hello! My name is 최준영 from class 23. Today, in this speaking contest, I will talk about one main topic, about cigarettes. Many might think I am talking smoking is bad. Well, actually, I don't disagree from an idea of smoking. Truly in my own opinion, I think smoking is not that bad. Of course, I won't smoke when I grow up. However, some enjoys cigarettes, and some, also can do much better job when they do them after smoking. A good example is my friend's father. Anyway, as to emphasize, I'm never saying that smoking is bad. The thing I want to tell is, the cigarette butts of snipes, which are on fire, are bad. Some might think like this. ' It's just a little end of cigar, what that little thing can do'. From now, I will tell you a scariest thing that 'little thing' can make.
There are two examples which will help me to support my claim. First one is for people, mainly, and another is for animals in the wild or pets. Let's start with our first one, about humans. This was the time when I went to the amusement park. I was playing with my friends because it was one of their birthday. We took roller coasters, zirodrop(name of a machine), and many other things. And the time we would go home, we were exhausted. Maybe that was a frist time for us to feel that we wanted to study. At last, we could hear a magnificent scream and cry. I couldn't distinguish what is what because it was a extremely high tone. However, the source of them were different. One was from baby inside its baby carriage, and another was from his mother. Although the origin of the screams were different, the reason was exactly the same. The baby carriage was burning with the baby still inside!!! Everyone who was there were terrified and moved busily to turn off the fire. Luckily fire was gone after a moment. One interesting scene was, the men pouring a fire extinguisher on baby's face. It might been helpful for fire fighting, but eventually, it made baby cry much more louder. Do you know why this had happened?? It is because a little cigarette butt which is thrown by a men. That little thing can had killed one human life!!!!
Another is, for animals, especially if they are stupid. I raised two dogs once. However, here,

Ode

Dear GTA3
you are thrilling,
your actions are great,
your sounds make my heart beat fast
your graphic is the best
I want to have you
I want to play you
I want to crash you
I want to shoot you
Just wait.....I will do everything to you

2011년 1월 13일 목요일

Rhythem Star

Rhythem Star
fast, fun
shoothing, running, speeding
Stuents, friends, families
winning, earning, losing
getting medals!!!

Ice skating

Ice Skating
fast speed, thrilling feel
speeding, running, sliding
Coaches, students, athletes, competitors.
winning, losing, laughing, crying.
Winning the Championship!!

2011년 1월 11일 화요일



< after watching " spring, summer, fall, winter, spring "


     Movie  spring, summer, fall, winter, spring is a movie which one young monk's master saw him tortchering animals, fish, frog, snake, and did same thingto him., which was tieing a rock to his body to teach him a lesson. There can be many people that disagree with master's teaching method. At the first scene, I thought like that also. I thought he was too cruel to the boy. However, now, I think it is reasonable punishment for the action that boy did. I think its the most effective and a thing that leaves a strong meaning to someone who did sojmething wrong. So, I agree with his strange teaching sklls to make him know his faults well. And this one thing following is my own experience which is very similar - almost the same punishment I got to the teacher, for similar reason.
     This was a thing which happened in my own school. When I was 3rd grade, there was a game called attack the ants. Do you know how to play this game?? It is same as the name. Just attacking ants, stepping on them. As usual, I was attacking the ants at break time with my friends. It was fun as usual. Everything were same exept one big thing which was different happened. One friend of mine got cauget by teacher. It might be okay if it was our homeroom teacher. However, unluckily, it was the scariest teacher in our school -  our math teacher. He caught only one boy, not me. Don't think I'm lucky yet. My story is not finished yet. That jerk called everyone who played together with him to teacher. Of course, I was in that group also. The punishment was, we being the ants and him acting almost the same we did to ants. We lied in front of the class. And later, he started to step on our back. It was very painful. Luckily, we didn't died like those poor ants. Now, he is not in our school. He got cauget by headmaster of our school. But after that lesson which was very cruel to me,  we could not step on ants again.
     In conclusion, like this, I think even though the way punishing is cruel, I think it is good to have the method which is cruel, but effective, like the thing that master done to his pupil.

after watching "spring, summer, fall, winter, spring"

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2011년 1월 7일 금요일

Writing class in KMLA - writing chain:It was a dark stormy night by class23

Introduction
 I think it was a pretty good story. The start was a dark stormy night, so I was trying to make it as a scary horror story, but actually it became better than I thought. But the last part and the name of people, because it was little complicated, it was not my type. So, I changed those into more simple names and relationships.
Essay
It was a dark stormy night. A men was looking out of his window. He was human hunter, whose name was Jigsaw. He spotted one man. His eyes started to glow in the dark. That poor man didn't know he was not going to see the sunlight again after this night. His job was professor and as usual, he was walking slowly to his house to see his cute son and his beautiful wife. He also was a professor who taught Jigsaw in the college. The professor's name was Mr. Harry. He almost always punished Jigsaw and he is the one who made Jigsaw unable to see his family again. Suddenly, Jigsaw jumped out of the window. He didn't get hurt because he is trained as a killer at army. Behind him. Jigsaw thought for a while.
'Hmm... is it right for me to kill my past professor?? But he killed my parents. It is right for me to kill him for the revenge. That's right. I will KIL:L HIM!!!!'
After few seconds. Mr. Harry was bleeding under Jigsaw's foot, who was smiling, dead. The police came but it was too late. There was no Jigsaw but his note, wrote
' I'm human hunter Jigsaw. From now, I will kill everyone who has done something to me and my family. You should beware of  me. I will give 1 day. You better leave this country. ' From that day, on the news, always there was Jigsaw's face and notes which was different everyday, and person who was dead. This was a life he dreamed everyday. He kept running away, enjoying the thrill of murder. From the day when police found first note of  Jigsaw, exactly one year past. Jigsaw knew that there will be lots of polices there. And he was right. But, he went there anyways. He needed a swat tank for his another mission. He got a person tracking him, and he was now right behind him, whose name was lemon. Lemon shouted " there is Jigsaw!! Kill him before he kills anyone!!!" Using that time, Polices in the swat tank came out. Jigsaw climbed in there and started the engine. Inside, there were many weapons. He took bombs and landmines and threw them towards other tanks and cars following him. Luckily, he could destroy all of them. One strange thing about Jigsaw was that he didn't made his teams. Other famous killers such as Harang, who was Jigsaw's father, made so many teams in the world, and as I told, MR. Harry knew that and tell that to police and made him to get death penalty. 30 years past after that. Jigsaw was now too old. There was one person left who killed all the families even cousins of Jigsaw, president of america. Old swat tank was in his garage with new weapons never used. we started the engine and went to white house, where president was living. Guards thought strange about why old swat tank will come here. Jigsaw ignored them and killed all, and stole the monster truck they had. He crashed in the glass door. There was U.S president right infront of him. Jigsaw fired every weapons he got. Eventually, none of them could get to the president, but to his body guards. He took bombs out and hugged president. More guards came but it was too late. Bomb was fired and they both died.                                                                           - The End -
I think the first one was little complicated story, so I changed into more simple, short and impacting story I liked the story afterall